Instructions for Submission of
Comments on Draft Prospectus for Product 2.3

Please follow these instructions for preparing and submitting your review. A sample format sheet is provided below. Send your comments as an e-mail attachment to by 24 Oct 2007.

In making comments:

• Please refer to PDF version of prospectus when submitting comments. As per instructions, comments must refer to line numbers listed in the PDF file.
• Provide complete contact information.  The Climate Change Science Program Office (CCSPO) may need to contact you seeking clarification.
• Provide specific language for deletions, additions, and/or amendments.
• Avoid auto-formatting and do not embed comments in tables.
• Organize your comments into “general comments” that apply to the entire product, and “specific comments” that apply to page and line numbers. Organize the specific comments in page and line number sequence, as per the sample format below. Insert your name and affiliation after each comment.
• Do not number your comments and do not use terminology such as “ditto” or “see above”, since your comments will be collated by page and line numbers into a compilation with comments from others.

Sample Format for Comments I. Background Information Name(s):  John Doe Organization(s): University College Mailing Address(es): 101 1st Street, New York, New York, 10001 Phone(s): 800-555-5555 Fax(es): 800-555-6666 E-mail(s): Area of Expertise: Atmospheric Composition II. General Comments First General:  (Comment) Reviewer's name, affiliation: John Doe, University College Second General Comment: (Comment) Reviewer's name, affiliation: John Doe, University College III. Specific Comments Page 57, Line 5: (Comment) John Doe, University College Page 58, Line 32 - Page 59, Line 5: (Comment) John Doe, University College Table 1-4, Row 3, Column 6: (Comment) John Doe, University College

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